“Maya – I think we’ll have to go to the other end of the city to collect your school stuff today. Let’s get going.”
“Ok.”
Both of them spent an enjoyable day after their shopping, catching the latest flick in movies and having a pizza lunch positively swimming in cheese. Walking back from the nearest metro station, Aks seemed lost in contemplation. Maya felt a strange sense of déjà vu walking between the blocks. She stiffened as the saw the now-familiar burly shadows creeping up. She turned to shout – “Aks..” and found her limp form being pushed into a car behind.
Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Field’s Fridayfictioneers .
Author’s note: This flash fiction tale is an extract from my recently published book, Maya & the Mind Mystics. To see more details, click here.
Uh oh.
Uhha 🙂
plenty of drama there
Thanks Neil
Dear Lavanya,
Compelling snippet.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle
Nice extract. Such a lovely start that turned dark.
Thanks Iain
Want to know what happens next: I know I have to reAd the book for that
😁 pls do
Doesn’t sound like Maya is in a good place…
She is a survivor 😁
Dear Lavanya, Good story – I hope she gets the license plate number!
That she didn’t! Careless of her
Oh dear, and it started out so well. Nice one Lavanya
Click to read my FriFic!
Thanks Keith
Oh, no! Not a happy ending–or beginning, either, for poor Aks.
Oh dear. How that could happen right under her nose!
Unfortunate. Thanks for writing in